tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2827499535918250952.post2042737900790858428..comments2023-07-03T03:24:49.237-06:00Comments on Kayeleen's Creation Corner: Try It Out Tuesday: Show Vs TellKayeleen Hamblinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07652280450104899423noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2827499535918250952.post-2085041288689486562011-01-12T11:22:02.620-07:002011-01-12T11:22:02.620-07:00Nicely done, Kayeleen! This is something I am cons...Nicely done, Kayeleen! This is something I am constantly working on with my composition students. :)Shannon O'Donnellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17299313309059235876noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2827499535918250952.post-16440558959470116672011-01-12T09:22:15.553-07:002011-01-12T09:22:15.553-07:00What a great exercise and a great piece! It left m...What a great exercise and a great piece! It left me wondering if maybe he was a bad guy after all! I'm going to try and incoorperate more showing less telling in my WIP tonight. Lord knows it will make editing all that much more easier.Tanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10518718614911804428noreply@blogger.com